sure!Here are the polishes and rewrites I have made to the copy you provide to make it more emotional depth and literary:
**Original sentence: **
An ageing rock star decides to change his life when he discovers a 40-year-old letter written to him by John Lennon.
**After polished version: **
A rock star who is in his twilight years accidentally discovered a letter written by John Lennon himself and caused a stir in his heart. He decided to pick up the strings of life again and play a different music of life for himself.
If you wish to retain the English expression, I can also provide an English polished version.Do I need to polish the English version too?
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Al Pacino
Annette Bening
Jennifer Garner
Bobby Cannavale
Christopher Plummer
Josh Peck
Katarina Čas
Nick Offerman
Melissa Benoist
Danny Collins
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Universal Acclaim
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Directed by:Dan Fogelman
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sure!Here are the polishes and rewrites I have made to the copy you provide to make it more emotional depth and literary:
**Original sentence: **
An ageing rock star decides to change his life when he discovers a 40-year-old letter written to him by John Lennon.
**After polished version: **
A rock star who is in his twilight years accidentally discovered a letter written by John Lennon himself and caused a stir in his heart. He decided to pick up the strings of life again and play a different music of life for himself.
If you wish to retain the English expression, I can also provide an English polished version.Do I need to polish the English version too?