sure.The following is a retouching of the original sentence to make it more emotional tension and literary:
**Touched version: **
A police force on the verge of collapse is chasing the murderer who cruelly slaughtered women and put the entire state in fear in the bloody storm.Justice struggles on the verge of shaking, while hunters in the darkness are still silently approaching their next target.
If you want this sentence to be the beginning of the novel, the introduction of the movie or the promotional copy, I can also further adjust the style according to the purpose.Do I need to provide multiple versions for different scenarios?
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sure.The following is a retouching of the original sentence to make it more emotional tension and literary:
**Touched version: **
A police force on the verge of collapse is chasing the murderer who cruelly slaughtered women and put the entire state in fear in the bloody storm.Justice struggles on the verge of shaking, while hunters in the darkness are still silently approaching their next target.
If you want this sentence to be the beginning of the novel, the introduction of the movie or the promotional copy, I can also further adjust the style according to the purpose.Do I need to provide multiple versions for different scenarios?
