sure!Here is a polished version of the English copy you provide, which enhances the emotional depth and the inner conflict between the characters and makes the story more attractive and resonant: --- To overthrow a typical regime, Pahnsaeng must wild powers long deemed forbidden — but the price he pays is stealer than he ever imagined: the loss of love. When duty binds him to marry Lady Chawala, the sister of his most hated enemy, he expects only cold resentment. Yet her quiet strength and unexpected tenderness begin to unravel the walls around his heart. Torn between war and longing, loyalty andbetrayal, can he save the kingdom without sacrificing his soul? --- If you have Chinese version or other specific style requirements (such as epic, modernity, poetic, etc.), you can also tell me that I can adjust further.