Of course, here is my polished version of this copy, making it more emotionally tension and delicate description, and enhancing the emotional connection between characters and the infectiousness of the story:
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When Zhao Mosheng first met He Yichen in law school, he couldn't help but feel moved.She was like a lightly jumping deer, quietly walking through the corner of his life - encounters in the library, passing by the canteen, peeking in the back row of lectures... Behind the "accidental encounters" again and again, was the throbbing and joy that she could not hide.
And He Yichen slowly fell into decline with her bright smile and stubborn persistence.Two souls with different personalities quietly approached in the light and shadow of youth, becoming an enviable campus couple.
However, the good times did not last long, and Yichen's adopted sister He Yimei's persistent concern for him made a ripple of uneasiness in Mosheng's heart.Faced with emotional doubts, she mustered up the courage to verify with Yichen, but only received his unexpected cold response.Disheartened, she mistakenly thought that the two had already broken up, so she finally chose to obey her father's arrangement and go to the United States to continue her studies, burying that unfinished love deep in her heart.
Seven years later, Zhao Mosheng, who has become a professional photographer, returned to his hometown. Under the arrangement of fate, he met again with the unforgettable He Yichen again.Time flies, people and things are no longer the same, but that unexplained emotion seems to have never gone far...
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