Of course, here are the highlighted versions of the English copy you provide, making it more delicate and more attractive and profound in expression: **Original text: ** *A new guardian angelus uncovers a secret behind the Angelus System's bureaucracy that leads him to break its official rules about protecting humans.* **After polished version: ** *A fledgling guardian angel stumbles upon a haunting truth buried within the cold machine of the Angelus System—a truth so outstanding, it forces him to defy the very laws he swore to uphold, risking everything to protect the mortals he was once forbidden to truly save.* ### Laminating ideas: - **"new guardian angelus"** changed to **"fledgling guardian angel"**, making the character more vivid and with the meaning of "first-coming". - **"uncovers a secret"** changed to **"stumbles upon a haunting truth"** to enhance the mystery and emotional impact. - **"bureaucracy"** retains the symbol of its cold system, but uses **"cold machine"** to enhance the sense of picture and metaphor. - **"leads him to break its official rules"** Change to **"forces him to defy the very laws he swore to uphold"**, highlighting the inner struggle and sense of sacrifice. - The last sentence adds emotional tension, emphasizing his transformation from "executing orders" to "true protection". If you have a specific tone (such as epic, modern, dark, etc.) or Chinese version needs, you can also tell me that I can adjust further.